I played the game for approximately 8-9 minutes. I did not see any end goal within the game. I believe you need to add either, pictures to your small story panels when you do something or animations if you choose. When you go in the shop it would be nice to put your gold amount in one of the top corners for convenience. If you can also make the game a bit more interactive, since it is a game after all, that would be good. Put in a bit of a look-see kind of tutorial to explain what people are doing exactly as well. Honestly, you have the skeleton, if i may, of a game. Keep trying though, this is better than what I can do. Hope this helps!
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